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Posted on Sunday, June 29th, 2008 at 2:14 amDr.Seuss Story?
so i had to write a story like Dr. Seuss .... this is what i have so far.. is it good? what can i add or any other ideas?
Tubby Tompkins was just a boy, who always loved to play with toys. Tubby tompkins had millions,billions no trillions of toys. He had a barn that came with yarn, a genie that was super teenie, a duck that drove a truck and a fish that cam with one wish. He played and played the days away until one day his mom was ready to send him away. Tubby was so mad that he ran to St. Clad. Tubby Tompkins greeted as he pleated with joy. He sat on a mat with a cowboy hat and played with the toys until he got fat, fat, fat. Tubby missed his mom so he kissed his barn that came with yarn, the genie that is super teenie, the duck that drove a truck and the fish that came with one wish.
thats all i have so far .. and i need more so please please help!!!:) or give me some other ideas .. thanks soooo much!!!
It sounds good up to the part where he runs away. Then it starts to lose a little sense. You may want to fix that part up a bit. Pax-C
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